My First Film

Hey guys,

So my cousin and I decided that we wanted to start making films. This is our first try, and I think it turned out okay. I know that there's some problems with it, (in the form of continuity, and reflections in the storefront), but I just want to know what other people think before the YouTube trolls get to it. If you could leave some criticism, I would really appreciate it. I haven't put any titles into it, but watchit till the end.

Thanks!

Watch what? There's nothing for us to watch in your post. Just lots of little letters. A link to a place we could watch would be nice.

I'm sorry it'll be up in a few minutes.[/s]

It's up now sorry!